You loved, didn’t you?
It’s coloured all over your face.
On top of your skin you proudly
wore your heart,
fearless of it being ever ravaged
and torn apart.
Convinced that your virtuous feelings
were to be treasured and adored,
flaunted around the world as
an inspiration for others,
a match that started the fire that
spread across the earth.
But I’ve never seen a more sorrowful
expression in disguise of a
lovely smile.
You kept striding with vigour and
drive for something in the realm
of dreams and birds,
but the bird flew away.
The dream was never yours to live,
so dry your lovely smile,
shed tears with your lonely eyes,
and paint your broken heart onto
the canvas; it’s all you can now
share with the world,
The love is no longer yours…
so fantastically gorgeous! Gorgeous, gorgeous, gorgeous. your writing is like endulging in decadent dessert everytime. Thanks for being the writer you are. ❤
Thank you R.L.King, I’m glad you enjoyed it 🙂
oh, that’s far too formal, ~R will do. lol
unfortunately I’m far too shy and reserved to be anything but formal, sorry 🙂
I was laughing because, really, ~R, is still pretty formal, not even a first name basis. But since I enjoy your writing you’re likely to hear from me again…so ~R.L. King or ~RLBK it’s up tp you.Happy writing
hihi thank you ~R
Very lovely, written with strong emotions, Ami~
Thank you Lauren!
Your opening verse is so perfect! Your entire poem speaks the truth about a lost love…
Thanks so much, I really appreciate it!
Incredible beautiful.
thank you!
Oh, oh, absolutely STUNNING in it’s truth!!!
Thanks a lot Bellesogni!
I’ve nominated you for a blog award. Rules at the link…http://m00nsh1n3.wordpress.com/2012/06/12/one-lovely-blog-award/
Thank you sooo much! And I apollogise for the long wait.
Your welcome! No problem! I have been busy too!